The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in 5 different countries in 2002. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The table chart provided data about the percentage of 3 different sectors outgoing in five

countries

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, namely Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden, and

Turkey

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in 2002.

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, the highest proportion of total expenditure was spent on

food

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, drink, and

tobacco

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in all

countries

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. The least spending was witnessed on

leisure

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and education in whole given

countries

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Turkey

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led in both

food

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, drink and

tobacco

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and

leisure

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sectors, at 32.14% and 4.35%, respectively,

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Turkey

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came after Italy in terms of clothing and footwear spending, at 6.63% . Ireland stood at only just under

Turkey

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, at 28.91% in

food

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expenditure and 2.21% of total money spent on

leisure

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and education,

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it was around three times less than clothing and footwear sections ( 6.43%). The proportion of

food

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, drink and

tobacco

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accounted for 18.80%,

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it seemed threefold less in clothing expense (6.51%) and 1.98% of

money

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the money

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was paid for

leisure

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facilities in Spain. The percentages of

food

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, drinks and

tobacco

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in Sweden and Italy seemed to

15.77

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be 15.77

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% and 16.36%

accordingly

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. The expenditures in the

leisure

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and education

field

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fields

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for both

countries

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were nearly the same percentage, the former was 3.22% and the latter represented 3.20%. Italy dominated

clothing

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the clothing

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section and stood at 9%,

however

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, Sweden seemed at 6.51% .

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Vocabulary: Replace the words countries, turkey, food, tobacco, leisure with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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4 paragraphs

208 words

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