You recently traveled by plane from London to Sydney. Write a letter to the airline company about your experience. In your letter: • Describe the purpose of your trip and when you traveled. • Explain what you liked about the flight and the airline's service. • Mention any areas where you feel improvements could be made. • Provide suggestions or recommendations for enhancing the overall travel experience. Write at least 150 words.
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Dear manager,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am pleased to inform you that I have an opportunity to fly with you for my London to Sydney trip. I have had an amazing experience during my flight.
For starters, your crew members were super friendly and helpful. They were frequently asking if I need any help. Your foods were delightful and carefully cooked just to my liking. And the ambience inside the plane was also
very pleasing.
One small thing though, the seats were on the uncomfortable side with very small leg room and felt so stiff. Also
the seatbelt was a bit hard to use. Other passengers were Add a comma
,Also
also
complaining about the same things.
Overall
I had a very good experience travelling with your airlines. Improving the thing or two I mentioned earlier, you could be among the best airlines in the world. I can’t wait to fly with you again.
Best Wishes,
Robert KiyosakiSubmitted by sth.kumar2010 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite