The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics. Describe the information shown below in your own words.
The chart informs about the
indicators
of social and economic for four countries in 1994. Overall
, it can be seen that Japan has the highest indicators
in the annual revenue per person
with their possible age and reading habit while
Zaire was the lowest score in all indicators
.
Income per person
was the highest in Japan followed by Canada with 15,760 and 11,100 respectively. Furthermore
, their lifespan expectancy was the highest among three other countries which stand at the age of 78. In the daily calorie supply per person
, it was obvious that Canada can provide more calorie supply to their citizen with 3,326 per person
. Canada and Japan stand at the same ratio for their adult literacy rate of 99%.
On the other hand
, the lowest score for the four indicators
occurred in Zaire. Its annual income per person
, and life expectancy death were the lowest among other countries with 130 and 47 respectively. Their daily supplies of calories and the adult literacy rate were also
in the lower bracket with scores of only 1749 and 34.Submitted by galihw on
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