The graphs below show the average exam marks achieved by students at english, japnese and italian language courses in a university. The passing marks are 50 and maximum marks are 100. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the information
marks
obtained by pupils in three different Use synonyms
language
courses namely Use synonyms
English
, Japanese and Use synonyms
Italian
in four semesters, Use synonyms
whereas
, the pie chart describes the percentage of Linking Words
students
that get divided by their final results.
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Overall
, it is observed that the majority of Linking Words
students
acquire maximum Use synonyms
marks
in Use synonyms
English
and minimum in Use synonyms
Italian
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Linking Words
the
performance in Change the word
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Italian
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also
gets improved with each passing Linking Words
semester
, Use synonyms
while
, in the case of Japanese, the Linking Words
marks
remained almost steady in all the semesters.
In the case of the Use synonyms
English
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language
in the bar graph, Use synonyms
students
attain approximately 85 in the Use synonyms
first
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semester
and 90 in the next. ,Use synonyms
Also
the performance of Linking Words
students
in Use synonyms
English
get plummeted from Use synonyms
semester
three to four by 9. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, Linking Words
students
, who are studying the Japanese Use synonyms
language
achieved 51, 61, 65 and 62 in the Use synonyms
Linking Words
first
, Use synonyms
Linking Words
second
, third and fourth semesters respectively. Use synonyms
Additionally
, Linking Words
marks
obtained by school children in the Use synonyms
Italian
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language
get proliferated at a very high speed from the Use synonyms
first
Use synonyms
semester
till the Use synonyms
last
.
In the case of the division of Linking Words
marks
in the pie chart, 14% of Use synonyms
students
come under the category of Use synonyms
first
class, Use synonyms
whereas
, nine per cent are considered as failures. Linking Words
Apart from
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this
, Linking Words
students
attaining higher Use synonyms
second
position were twenty-seven per cent; Use synonyms
however
, lower Linking Words
second
positioned Use synonyms
students
were 3 % more in comparison with the higher Use synonyms
second
. Use synonyms
In addition
to Linking Words
this
, only 20% of Linking Words
students
acquire third-class positions out of 100%.Use synonyms
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