The graphs below show the average exam marks achieved by students at english, japnese and italian language courses in a university. The passing marks are 50 and maximum marks are 100. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar graph illustrates the information
marks
obtained by pupils in three different language
courses namely English
, Japanese and Italian
in four semesters, whereas
, the pie chart describes the percentage of students
that get divided by their final results.
Overall
, it is observed that the majority of students
acquire maximum marks
in English
and minimum in Italian
. Moreover
, the
performance in Change the word
my
Italian
also
gets improved with each passing semester
, while
, in the case of Japanese, the marks
remained almost steady in all the semesters.
In the case of the English
language
in the bar graph, students
attain approximately 85 in the first
semester
and 90 in the next. ,Also
the performance of students
in English
get plummeted from semester
three to four by 9. Furthermore
, students
, who are studying the Japanese language
achieved 51, 61, 65 and 62 in the first
, second
, third and fourth semesters respectively. Additionally
, marks
obtained by school children in the Italian
language
get proliferated at a very high speed from the first
semester
till the last
.
In the case of the division of marks
in the pie chart, 14% of students
come under the category of first
class, whereas
, nine per cent are considered as failures. Apart from
this
, students
attaining higher second
position were twenty-seven per cent; however
, lower second
positioned students
were 3 % more in comparison with the higher second
. In addition
to this
, only 20% of students
acquire third-class positions out of 100%.Submitted by manjotkaur540 on
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