The pie chart below show the online shopping sales for retail sector in new Zealand in 2003 and 2013.
The pie charts illustrate how people shopped via the Internet for books, clothes, film/music and travel in Zealand in the years 2003 and 2013.
overall
, the rate at which people chopped varied in both years. In 2003, travelling had the most online sales
whilst filming/ music was the most popular in 2013
From the chart ,it is clear that
travelling had the highest sales
in 2003 with 36% and experience a substantial drop to 29%in 2013. The percentage of people who bought cloth online stood at 24% in 2003. This
also
saw a significant decrease to 16% in 2013.
The rate of individuals who patronize film/music accounted for 21% of internet sales
in 2003 but this
saw more than 10% increase to 33% in 2013. It had the highest percentage of sales
for the year 2013. Persons who purchased books through the net was 19% in 2003 this
however
rose marginally to 22% in 2013.Submitted by yahayasonde2 on
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