A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -request advise about a gift for his/her family -ask about activities and clothing in his/her country -find out about the food

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Dear Samantha, How are you now? I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter to
regards
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your invitation to your country. I'
m
really excited to visit
Hawaii
because
this
is my first time travelling there. Since
this
is the
first,
I would like you
share
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some information about
Hawaii
's destination, culture, and how I'
m
going to visit your house
about
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1
weeks
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. Before
I'
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m
go to
Hawaii
next week, I'
m
thinking to give some
present
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for
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your family. I would like to bring some snacks from Indonesia but do you/ your families have any
recommendation
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recommendations
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about snacks or
item
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items
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you really miss from Indonesia? If you have, I would be happy to bring it to
Hawaii
. Despite
Hawaii
is
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known
about
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for
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many beaches, do they have any priorities destination I should go and how about the
country
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weather? I'
m
so enthusiastic to visit your country tourism, so I have more preparation about what should I wear and
also
any pieces of
cloths
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I brought to
Hawaii
for 1
weeks
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. At the moment I arrive, could you
helping
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me
where
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with where
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the foodcourt
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foodcourt
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food court
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or restaurant
that
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is most favourite? I would like to express
about
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your kindness to help me prepare. Regards, William
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