A friend you met last year has invited you to visit him/her in his/her country. You have never been there before and need some information before you leave. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -request advise about a gift for his/her family -ask about activities and clothing in his/her country -find out about the food
Dear Samantha,
How are you now? I hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter to regards
your invitation to your country. I'Wrong verb form
regard
m
really excited to visit Hawaii
because this
is my first time travelling there. Since this
is the first,
I would like you share
some information about Add the particle
to share
Hawaii
's destination, culture, and how I'm
going to visit your house about
1 Change preposition
in about
weeks
.
Before Change to a singular noun
week
I'
Unnecessary verb
I
m
go to Hawaii
next week, I'm
thinking to give some present
Fix the agreement mistake
presents
for
your family. I would like to bring some snacks from Indonesia but do you/ your families have any Change preposition
to
recommendation
about snacks or Fix the agreement mistake
recommendations
item
you really miss from Indonesia? If you have, I would be happy to bring it to Fix the agreement mistake
items
Hawaii
.
Despite Hawaii
is
known Wrong verb form
being
about
many beaches, do they have any priorities destination I should go and how about the Change preposition
for
country
weather? I'Change noun form
country's
m
so enthusiastic to visit your country tourism, so I have more preparation about what should I wear and also
any pieces of cloths
I brought to Correct your spelling
clothes
Hawaii
for 1 weeks
.
At the moment I arrive, could you Change to a singular noun
week
helping
me Change the verb form
help
where
Change preposition
with where
Correct article usage
the foodcourt
foodcourt
or restaurant Correct your spelling
food court
that
is most favourite? I would like to express Correct pronoun usage
apply
about
your kindness to help me prepare.
Regards,
WilliamChange preposition
apply
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