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The given pictures illustrate how Youngsville in New Zealand transformed over the course of 25 years, starting in 1980.

The given pictures illustrate how Youngsville in New Zealand transformed over the course of 25 years, starting in 1980.
Overall
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it is clear that
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 Youngsville had undergone significant transformations from housing places with various trees into an industrial area with factories, a stadium, and skyscrapers. In 1980, Youngsville looked much greener surrounded by plenty of trees and houses.
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, 25 years after, the woodland located to the south of the river was cut down to make way for warehouses and factories, which were around the school and airport.
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, the houses along the railway station were
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 demolished to construct new skyscrapers in the southeast of the town. In 2005,
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 the hospital still remained unchanged, a new stadium and car park were built on the Northern side of the hospital. The majority of the trees were removed to build a park with distinct facilities.
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, in front of the newly constructed stadium, the railway was extended all up to the north, and a new marina was constructed almost next to the railway station.

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