As can be seen from the chart there are some Europen countries such as;finland and swend . The chart illustrates the divorce rates diffrences between 2011 to 2015

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Sweden

. The chart illustrates the divorce

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diffrences

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between 2011 to 2015. It is crystal clear that

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and Sweden.

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every year.In 2011 it is almost 35

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when we look at 2012, we may observe that the slowly decrease.

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,between 2013 and 2014 there is a sharp rise. It was nearly %41.In 2015 it had changed a lot and it was

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changes . The highest figures were seen in 2012 it is almost %50.Between 2013 to 2015 we can clearly see that there is a decline.

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