The top priority of businesses is making money, and they do net need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern

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,

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are the economy of a country. Some people think that

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only need to focus on generating profits

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and that there is no need to have public responsibilities. I would disagree with

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opinion as

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is not as important as our society and

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factor can lead to the lack of environmental enterprises. On the one hand,

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is not as crucial

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our society.

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has a pivotal role in our life. It can be used for purchasing most of the things in the

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, but it can'

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buy another

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. There is only one

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universe, and humans are controlling it.

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world

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provides places to live, food, and so on.

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, human has the responsibility to preserve it. Many activities can be held with

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by

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. These can impact a lot on our planet, making the

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a better place.

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can donate

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to many different charities, a way to help poor people or rescue endangered animals.

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can both help the public and increase the companies' reputations.

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, there will be less effective charities all around the

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. The

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that they save from their own properties or from donations by local people can be less than expected. There won'

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be enough cash to set up many amazing plans whose impact would be massive. Most of the best ideas require lots of cash.

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only donations from the public won'

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ever be enough. Citizens

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need to take care of themselves, so if they donated, they would just provide a few, not much.

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is the reason why

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should spend much of their profits on donating. If there weren'

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any

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would be nothing. In conclusion,

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may be vital to our life but the

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is more important. Everyone has the same purpose of preserving

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planet since it is currently the only place that offers to live. So

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have to give a hand to help preserve our

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.

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can be made in hundreds. thousands or even trillions, but there is only one

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.