The chart bellow shows the results of a survey about people's coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.
The presented bar graph illustrates the amount of buying and consuming
such
goods as tea and coffee
in 5 different cities of Australia. The survey also
presents 3 categories of people
, which were observed in the last
4 weeks.
The first thing to mention is that the major part of served people
prefers to use the services of local cafes (the number exceeds 60%) - such
a tendency can be seen almost in all cities.
Secondly
, analysing another group, it can be said that people
who prefer to buy instant coffee
instead
of fresh one , are more numerous, also
in all areas.
Further
speaking, it should be pointed out that amount of such
people
(preferring instant coffee
) fluctuates by about 50%, and the leader there, undoubtfully, is Hobart. On the contrary
, Sydney has the lowest position there.
And last
but not least - the amount
of Change the quantifier
number
people
who bought fresh coffee
can be concluded as the smallest in every observed city. And there Sydney and Melbourne absolutely are leaders. In contrast
, Brisban and Adelaide take the lowest positions.
Overall
, it can be said that general consumption and buying habits have the same "shape", the same characteristics in the main cities of Australia.Submitted by nurdiananur.210201 on
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