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The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives information about species used for animal testing in the U.S. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied chart represents data about animal species that are used in
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U.S
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U.S.
 for testing purposes.
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, it is obvious that rabbits are highly demanded animals and go through testing more than any other species. As can be seen that a very small proportion of
diagram
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the diagram
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 takes sheep demand in animal testing and the largest one is rabbits which fill 38.7% of the chart.
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, hamsters which take
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up 27.7
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% of the chart are in
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second place by their importance in
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 field.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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