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The top priority of bussinesses is making money, and they do not need to have social responsibilities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#priority #bussinesses #money #responsibilities
Many consider that enterprises should just generate profits which were their priority,
therefore
 they do not have any duties at public
responsibilites
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responsibilities
.
This
 writer agrees with
this
 point of view and will explain why during the essay. On the one hand, the government don’t care who you are or where you at. If you start a
bussiness
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business
, you always have social
responsibilites
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responsibilities
.
As a consequence
, throughout
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history, it’s become
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 for leaders and corporations to take action to accept their social
responsibilites
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responsibilities
.
Morever
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Moreover
, taking social
responsibilites
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responsibilities
responsibility
 can enable firms to entice higher-quality employees. High-standard employees often be flattered by not only qualified
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 but
also
 noted
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 which have
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taken philanthropic actions. On the other
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, taking public
responsibilites
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responsibilities
responsibility
 is the most likely ordinary and useful
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 to boost
corporation’s
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a corporation’s
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 image to the public.
For instance
,
in
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 the severe period of
Covid-19
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 pandemic,
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the umemployment
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umemployment
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unemployment
 rate in Vietnam witnessed a sharp increase. Vlance appeared as a helper thanks to its creation of job opportunities with freelance
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 and distant
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.
As a result
,
this
 action brought
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this
 firm both fame and respect.
Furthermore
, in
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contemporary nations around the world, the recognization of
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 government is at the forefront of
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 awareness. Firms concluding actions for communication will be enrolled in
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 of devotion. As an example,
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 Republic of Vietnam have
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plenty of policy to foster taking public
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responsibilities
responsibility
, the
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 worth considerating is Labor Medal. In conclusion, a pleasant company always require both expertise and good-taking social
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responsibilities
responsibility
. I would contend that taking that
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responsibility
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responsibility
 would bring a large amount of respect and detection for every
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