You are experiencing financial problems and want to ask you landlord if you can pay your rent late. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter explain. - why you can't pay the rent - when you will pay the rent - How you will ensure you can pay the rent in the future

Dear Sir or Madam, Let me introduce myself, my name is William

who

Correct pronoun usage

we

show examples

are living in your apartment on

third

Change the article

the third

show examples

floor with room number

is

Unnecessary verb

apply

show examples

15. I am writing

this

letter because I would like to draw your permission about my lateness

rent

payment. Let me explain the reason why I can not pay on time. The first condition was my father got

traffic

Correct article usage

a traffic

show examples

accident

last

week and he really

need

Change the verb form

needs

show examples

an

operation

as fast as possible.

Moreover

, the

operation

payment is out of my expectation.

Secondly

, after the

operation

, he

need

Change the verb form

needs

show examples

to stay at

hospital

Add an article

the hospital

show examples

until 3 weeks. Because of

this

accident

Add a comma

,accident

show examples

I am using all of my

saving

Fix the agreement mistake

savings

show examples

and

also

rent

money to cover my

father

Change noun form

father's

show examples

operation

bills. I would like your permission to give me 2 weeks to cover the

rent

. I will add 2

until

Change preposition

to

show examples

3 more jobs to cover my

rent

as soon as possible. I hope

your

Change preposition

for your

show examples

kindness

of

Change preposition

in

show examples

my unexpected

conditions

Fix the agreement mistake

condition

show examples

. If I can not pay in 2 weeks, I will

out

Add a missing verb

be out

show examples

from

Change preposition

of

show examples

the apartment and I promise you that in future, I will minimize any possibility

from

Change preposition

of

show examples

late payment. I would really

apreaciate

Correct your spelling

appreciate

your kindness in

this

situation. Yours sincerely, William