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Why do you think social skills are now being emphasized by companies during the recruitment process? Give specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

#skills #companies #recruitment #process #support
Everybody knows that companies use different methods when getting an employee. Their social
skills
 are able to show their character
information
 that's why some
employer
 has question about their social
skills
. İt is sometimes good type, sometimes is bad. İf we look at the good site employe's social able to show personality communication or it can show us their psychology types. Many smart bosses or employees are able to understand how is caractery
according to
 their answers and we can understand.
On the other hand
, social
skills
 questions are able to give us wrong
information
.
for example
, one person is able to good worker of his experience and job
however
 he can't join social life. İt is not meaning he can not be a good worker.
to sum up
, asking for social
skills
 is dependent on everybody sometimes showing us and helping how employee's character, sometimes giving us the wrong
information
. İn my opinion, the first
employer
 should ask about his experience if the
employer
 does not have enough get
information
, the
employer
 is able to ask about their social
skills
. We have some specific questions about our life, it is our special we don't want to give it like social
skills
.
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