Some people believe that in order to improve educational equality, we should encourage students to make comments or even criticism of their teachers, but others think it would lead to a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

Some individuals think that in order to
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quality
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the quality
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of
education
, we should motivate
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pupils
to make
comments
or even criticism of their
teachers
, but others feel it would lead to a loss of respect and discipline in the
classroom
. In my opinion,
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system should allow
students
to make
comments
or even criticism
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their
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performance
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because
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teachers
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performance
as well as
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the
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process
more engaging. On the one hand, some think
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school or universities allow
students
to assess the
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of their
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can
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to
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of respect and discipline in the
classroom
.
This
is because some
students
will give their
teachers
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negative
comments
without reasonable reasons, which
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teachers
less
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.
Furthermore
, if the
students
allow to evaluate the
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performance
can lead to increase indiscipline in
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. To illustrate,
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will become afraid
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comments
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pupils, which make teacher less strict in
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.
On the other hand
, I would like to agree with those people who believe
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pupils to assess the
performance
of their
teachers
can enhance
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educational equality.
To begin
with, via feedback of the
students
teachers
can know their strengths and weakness.
Consequently
,
teachers
can work in order to improve their
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in order to provide
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lessons.
Moreover
,
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students
to evaluate to
performance
of their
teachers
can lead to
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engaging
students
in
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process
.
This
is because
students
will have
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opprtunity
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opportunity
to share their ideas about
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system.
As a result
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the trend
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trend
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can increase the
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among children and make them a part
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learning
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the learning
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process
.
To sum up
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my perspective ,
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the education
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system should allow
students
to make
comments
or even criticism
in
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of
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their
teachers
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teacher's
teachers'
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performance
beucaue
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because
this
step will contribute to
enhance
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enhancing
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teachers
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teachers'
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performance
as well as
make
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making
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learning
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the learning
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process
for pupils more interesting.
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