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Some people believe that in order to improve educational equality, we should encourage students to make comments or even criticism of their teachers, but others think it would lead to a loss of respect and discipline in the classroom. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

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Some individuals think that in order to
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, we should motivate
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pupils
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 or even criticism of their
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, but others feel it would lead to a loss of respect and discipline in the
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. In my opinion,
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 to make
comments
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 or even criticism
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teachers
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because
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 more engaging. On the one hand, some think
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 school or universities allow
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 to assess the
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 to
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 of respect and discipline in the
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negative
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 without reasonable reasons, which
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teachers
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 less
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, if the
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. To illustrate,
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 of their
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educational equality.
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teachers
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students
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 to evaluate to
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 of their
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engaging
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 can increase the
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education
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 system should allow
students
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 to make
comments
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 or even criticism
in
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 their
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teachers
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performance
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beucaue
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because
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teachers
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learning
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 for pupils more interesting.
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