Your manager has asked you to arrange a party for a colleague leaving the company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter  suggest a suitable date and time for the party  recommend a venue  propose the food and entertainment options that should be available.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

letter with regard to inform you about a special farewell party in next few months. I would organise

this

party theme as a colourful night. First of all, I would recommend

to

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developing

this

event

on Mach 19th

as

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the same date as our company’s

aniversary

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anniversary

, which is a great time for all employees to

celebrating

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along with

my suggestion it would be

greatful

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great

if

this

event

should start at 7pm. sharp, because they will have some

times

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to get change before the party started.

In addition

,

the

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place

is

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suitable

with

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this

event

has been found. The location is the Diamond Star Hotel, because

these

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is a

five star

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hotel with the best river and city views, and

also

has a huge outdoor rooftop to fill up to 100 people maximum.

However

, the cost is slightly over the

budgets

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.

Consequently

, I would have to negotiate with them and if

everythings

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everything

goes well, I will

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you again.

Moreover

,

in

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that day,

Foods

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and

sweet

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are organized by the hotel as there is a famous chef of the world working in

this

venue.

Then

, we should not be

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about

this

much, but

nevertheless

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I provided them to search

some

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band

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to

develope

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develop

an

event

more lively. If you have any questions or concerns, Please do not hesitate to contact me

anytimes

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any time

. Sincerely, Cuttareeya