The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The bar chart given provides information about the
households
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number
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in the United States in a period from 2007 to 2015, depending on individuals' annual income. From the overview,
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group
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the group
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of those who earn from $75,000 to $99,999 was the smallest among these five groups. The
number
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of
household
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households
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of
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the
group
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of $50,000-$74,999 remained at about 20
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millions
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throughout the eight years period.
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with, we can see an increase in the
group
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which
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people earn less than $25,000 and $25,000-$49,999 in 2011, with roughly 28
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millions
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and almost 30
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millions
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respectively. As for the
group
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that
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apply
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people's earnings are higher than $100,000, the
number
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suffered from a decrease in 2011, yet went up dramatically and hit
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peak at around 33
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millions
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million
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in 2015.
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Number
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of
this
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group
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is usually higher than that of people who earn less than $49,999;
however
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, it was not the highest in 2011.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 71%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, group, millions with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • household distribution
  • income brackets
  • annual income
  • percentage change
  • trend analysis
  • income group
  • significant increase/decrease
  • steady growth/decline
  • fluctuations
  • compared to
  • in contrast
  • notably
  • median income
  • poverty line
  • economic factors
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