The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart given provides information about the
households
Change the noun form
household
number
in the United States in a period from 2007 to 2015, depending on individuals' annual income.
From the overview, Use synonyms
Use synonyms
group
of those who earn from $75,000 to $99,999 was the smallest among these five groups. The Correct article usage
the group
number
of Use synonyms
household
Fix the agreement mistake
households
of
the Change preposition
in
group
of $50,000-$74,999 remained at about 20 Use synonyms
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millions
throughout the eight years period.
Change to singular
million
To begin
with, we can see an increase in the Linking Words
group
Use synonyms
which
people earn less than $25,000 and $25,000-$49,999 in 2011, with roughly 28 Change preposition
in which
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millions
and almost 30 Change to singular
million
Use synonyms
millions
respectively.
As for the Change to singular
million
group
Use synonyms
that
people's earnings are higher than $100,000, the Correct pronoun usage
apply
number
suffered from a decrease in 2011, yet went up dramatically and hit Use synonyms
the
peak at around 33 Correct article usage
a
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millions
in 2015. Change to singular
million
Use synonyms
Number
of Change the article
A number
The number
this
Linking Words
group
is usually higher than that of people who earn less than $49,999; Use synonyms
however
, it was not the highest in 2011.Linking Words
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