In some countries, there is not enough respect for elderly people. What are the causes of this? Suggest some solutions.
Nowadays in some overseas, there is not good carrying old
people
. In this
essay, I will discuss these problems and solutions.
Distally, these days people
are very busy. they running to increase the occupation of level. Because of that, they protest they are real life. As an example, Some of them own businesses. They are tying
to improve it. Correct your spelling
trying
As a result
, they protest there
parents. Correct your spelling
their
On the other hand
, the other one is busy with children. As an example, they follow children's education. They always run to school and after school or extra class. As a result
, unfortunately, they protest the parents leading and communicating also
caring.
furthermore
, these problems bay by bay coming increasing. Government should take a solution. They can do it in elderly homes and people
should be informed. and also
, for example
, They have to always care for someone because of that they can take a home nurse and caring them.
In conclusion, Firstly
, people
are very busy with their occupations and their children. As a result
, they don't have much time to care parents. Secondly
, the government care about old people
and people
should be informed about it.Submitted by manushamanu1024 on
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