The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
The given diagram illustrates the process used in the construction business to produce bricks.
From an overview, the process is divided into three main stages shaping the mud, drying it and sending it to the sites.
The first step is
that a digger is used to collect the clay, after which it is placed on a metal grid and moved on a roller to remove the bigger particles. Linking Words
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, there are two ways to mould them, either the clay is shaped in a mould or pushed through a hollow cuboid box and cut with a wire cutter.
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The next step is
that the moulded clay is placed in a drying oven for 24-48 hrs and later on moved to a kiln with a moderate temperature of 200*C-980*C and Linking Words
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to a higher temperature of 870-1300*C to evaporate any moisture. Linking Words
Lastly
, it's placed in a cooling chamber for 48-72 hrs. Linking Words
Finally
, it is packed and sent for delivery.Linking Words
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