The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000, and marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.
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The given bar charts demonstrate the
number
of married people and divorced people in the USA over 3 decades and the marital status of teenagers in America in 1970 and 2000.
Overall
, as can be seen, in the first chart the
number
of marriages was the highest trend in both graphs. Looking at the information in more
details
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, the
number
of marriages was 2,5 in 1970
As well as
in 1980
while
this
was 1 and 1.4 for divorces.
Then
, in 1990 the rate of marriages was 2.3
whereas
in 2000 it was 2.
However
, in 1990 and 2000 the
number
of divorces remained stable. When it comes to the second chart, in 1970 the level of married adults was 70% meanwhile it fell to 60%. The figure for people who have never married was 10% in 1970 and 20% in 2000.
Furthermore
, the
number
of widowed individuals
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% in 1970 and 8% in 2000. Eventually, other groups were the lowest trends
in contrast
to the aforementioned categories.
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