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The maps illustrate the Islip town center now and how it would be changed in the future.

The maps illustrate the Islip town center now and how it would be changed in the future.
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The above maps display the Islip town
centre
Use synonyms
 before and after how it developed in the future. There is a lot of growth in the past time.
Firstly
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, in Islip town
centre
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 now, in the north it countryside there are shops, the main road and shops. In the east and west, there is less growth. In the ,south there is Housing, a lawn and a school.
Secondly
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, in the Islip town
centre
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: planned development, and in the east, there is a park. In the west, there is a Dual carriageway. In the north, there are lots of new things shopping
centre
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, a car lawn, new housing, a bus station and pedestrians. In the ,south there is housing, new housing, a school and a park.
Thirdly
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, in the middle there are houses. In , the past it was things were away compared to 2 maps. In conclusion, there is lots of change from before and after
such
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 as new things like a shopping
centre
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, a car park and more than
this
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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