The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The picture gives information about the manufacturing of instant noodles.

Overall

, the process is comprised of 8 steps which

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started from

storage

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the storage

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silo and ended up

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labelling and sealing. The first stage is when a flour machine comes to storage silos.

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water and

oil

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and soils go to

second

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the second

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step which is

mixer

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the mixer

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, between

step

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2 and 3 there are rollers.

Then

, materials which are mixed together are on the dough sheets. Afterwards, dough strips are level 4 and the strips go to noodles discs

and

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in the next

step

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the noodles cook with oil and give

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time to dry. In the following stage, there are so many cups which are included with vegetables and spices.

Finally

, the cups are labelled and sealed.

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
10Grammar mistakes
 

3 paragraphs

127 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

Manufacturing process
Noodle dough
Steaming
Cutting
Dough sheeting
Molding
Air-drying
Frying
Seasoning
Quality control
Packaging
Shelf life
Flavoring agents
Texture
Instant meal
Convenience food
Production line
Consumer
Ingredient mixing
Safety standards

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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some believe that training is necessary to be a good teacher, others think, teachers do not need a training course. Discuss both views along with your opinion

Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.

Write a letter to the publisher in a newspaper, asking to advertise a meeting of people from different countries you are organizing. Explain where, when and why

Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for the ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

Over the last few decades, there has been an increase in international tourism. Some people think that tourism is beneficial for local communities and should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree or disagree?