The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2 005.

The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2

005.
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how much money people in Germany, France, Italy and Austria spent on
books
from 1995 to 2005.
Overall
, it can be seen that there was an increase in the amount of money spent on
books
in all different four countries examined, with Austria witnessing the most dramatic rise in the latter half of the period,
while
Germany had
a
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highest figure throughout the period. The number of money spent on
books
in Germany started at 80
million
, after which it experienced a dramatic rise to 90
million
in 1999 and reach a peak of over 90
million
in 2005. Similar changes can be seen in the figure for Italy
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in the range from 50 to 55 from 1995 to 1999, followed by a progressive growth to
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of 60
million
in
final
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year. 30
million
people spent on
books
in Austria in 1995, with a significant rise to 40
million
and a final increase sharply to over 70
million
. The figure for France started at about 55
million
dollars, followed by a subsequent growth to 70
million
dollars in 2001 and
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at over 70
million
dollars in the final year.
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  • expenditure
  • fluctuate
  • trend
  • peak
  • trough
  • correlation
  • digital reading platforms
  • socio-economic factors
  • initiatives
  • cultural influence
  • statistical data
  • purchasing habits
  • book industry
  • consumer spending
  • educational resources
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