There is a problem with the changing rooms in the sports center that you visit. You have complained several times but with no success. Write a letter to the manager of the sports center. In your letter: • Describe what the problem with the changing rooms is • Say what happened the last times you complained • Explain what you want the manager to do

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to complain about the door locks of the changing rooms in our sports
centre
for which I've already registered an official complaint earlier
this
month but the issue is still not resolved. I am Sonia, an elite member of the Dennis Sports
Centre
.
Last
month, I noticed that the door locks of changing rooms are rusted and very hard to lock and unlock
while
accessing them. Immediately, I highlighted
this
issue to the
centre
's administrator at the front desk. The administrator assured me that it will be fixed within 2 business days, but later next week when I visited the
centre
, I faced the problem again
while
locking the door. I asked the front desk again about the complaint status but was disappointed to know that they forgot to book the service with the technician. After a few weeks, I checked and found that the issue still persists and the administrator had no answer to justify it. I would like to bring
this
problem to your attention because
this
is a matter of privacy and safety. Anyone can get stuck in the worst case.
Therefore
, I would request you to send the technician as soon as possible in order to fix the doors.
Additionally
, kindly guide and improve the front-desk services to be more responsible and proactive with reference to customer satisfaction. Thanks in advance for your consideration and prompt action. Yours faithfully, Sonia
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