The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
This
Linking Words
given
map
Use synonyms
chart
Use synonyms
illustrates both view the
map
Use synonyms
before and after so now explain to changes after that in the upcoming notion. A fleeting glance, Before
this
Linking Words
map
Use synonyms
, the island only planted coconut trees and a
beach
Use synonyms
But There are huge changes developed
such
Linking Words
as Now, There build a restaurant for customer's need food and
also
Linking Words
build reception for client's queries and make footpaths to connect all directions like the reception to the restaurant and
beach
Use synonyms
for swimming.
Next,
Linking Words
develop vehicle tracks to accommodate and planted more coconut trees.
However
Linking Words
, created a pier to connect the reception area.
Additionally
Linking Words
,
after
Linking Words
this
Linking Words
map
Use synonyms
accommodations were divided into two areas on the right side houses build in a circle and other houses built near to the
beach
Use synonyms
and very near to the restaurant. In conclusion,
this
Linking Words
chart
Use synonyms
is totally different from the past
chart
Use synonyms
as the two ships
also
Linking Words
use in the second
chart
Use synonyms
and fulfil many facilities for their clients,
Hence
Linking Words
, It was designed very beautifully and
also
Linking Words
used a
beach
Use synonyms
for swimming which is a very good idea.
Submitted by PREETY  on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words map, chart, beach with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
What to do next:
Look at other essays: