The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
given
map
chart
illustrates both view the
map
before and after so now explain to changes after that in the upcoming notion. A fleeting glance, Before
this
map
, the island only planted coconut trees and a
beach
But There are huge changes developed
such
as Now, There build a restaurant for customer's need food and
also
build reception for client's queries and make footpaths to connect all directions like the reception to the restaurant and
beach
for swimming.
Next,
develop vehicle tracks to accommodate and planted more coconut trees.
However
, created a pier to connect the reception area.
Additionally
,
after
this
map
accommodations were divided into two areas on the right side houses build in a circle and other houses built near to the
beach
and very near to the restaurant. In conclusion,
this
chart
is totally different from the past
chart
as the two ships
also
use in the second
chart
and fulfil many facilities for their clients,
Hence
, It was designed very beautifully and
also
used a
beach
for swimming which is a very good idea.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Vocabulary: Replace the words map, chart, beach with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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