A friend of yours is thinking of going on a camping holiday for the first time this summer

Hopefully, you and your family are doing well. My apologies for not being in touch .I am making it via
this
letter;at least I hope so. Based on my experience ,camping is the best use of the summer vacation for everyone. Most significantly, camping gives you a chance to be familiar with people of different backgrounds and cultures.
Besides
this
, don't miss the recreational activities, which most people miss because of their hectic schedules. Don't forget to keep some medicine in your bag because weather conditions are unpredictable over there so, you get sick easily .
Also
, do not forget to check the weather broadcast of the place. So, you can pack appropriate clothes
accordingly
. I wish I could join you for
this
camping. Unfortunately, I am unable to take leave from my workplace. I hope
this
letter finds you well. Do get back to me whenever you get a chance . Talk to you soon! Best Regards,
sukh
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