Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of pople's salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. Others feel that high taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
One of the most discussed societal
issue
is the number of Change to a plural noun
issues
people
believing that a great proportion
of people
's salaries
should be taken by governments
to pay for necessary public services such
as roads and schools while
other people
don't. In my opinion, governments
should not take a large proportion
of people
's salariers
because taxes in most countries are already high and taking even more would decrease their disposable income. Correct your spelling
salaries
Also
lower Add a comma
,Also
salaries
would make it difficult for people
to have a decent lifestyle.
First of all, people
believe that governments
should take a proportion
of their salary because by extracting this
percentage, there will be more funds to be used in
public services. Change preposition
for
Thus
, there will be improvments
in the sectors of public services. Correct your spelling
improvements
For example
, citizens will benefit on
driving greater and finer roads, schools can be renovated, teacher Change preposition
from
salaries
to be increased and a
more nutritious meals.
Second of all, there are individuals who believe that high taxes are unfortunate. By extracting a percentage from Correct article usage
apply
people
's salaries
, they will not be able to afford the lifestyle that they previously had. For example
, the fixed expenses such
as rent, mortgage, Correct word choice
and utilites
utilites
, just to name a few, will remain the same, Correct your spelling
utilities
while
their income will decrease. Simultaneously, the world is experiencing inflation wich
Correct your spelling
which
furthermore
negatively affects people
's disposable income.
In conclusion, governments
should not take a large proportion
of people
's salaries
, because it will affect their lifestyle. Also
, in some countries
the taxes are unbelievably high Add a comma
,countries
wich
makes it difficult for most Correct your spelling
which
people
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