The maps below show the village of Stokeford in 1930 and 2030. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictures provide information about the city of Stokeford as it was in 1930 and its prediction in 2023.
Overall
, the city will be transformed from a rural farmland town
to a very large residential area.
The Farmland in the southern area will be removed and replaced with housing along the main road
. The post office in the middle will be kept, but the shops that used to be beside the post office will be transformed into more housing. In Addition
to that, more housing will be added along with
an extended road
On the northeast side of the ,
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town
a new road
will be built along with
housing on both sides. This
will be taking over the farmland that used to be there. The primary school in the middle of the town
will be kept. But behind the school, a cluster will be built along the road
. Lastly
, the garden in the centre of the town
will be transformed into a retirement home.Submitted by irarahmawati.polkesma on
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