You recently attended a meeting at a hotel. When you returned home, you found you had left some important papers at the hotel. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter. - Say where you think you left the papers - Explain why they are so important - Tell the manager what you want him /her to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, Allow me to

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myself, my name is William. I am writing

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letter regards to our

company

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files

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had left in your meeting

room

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that used by our

company

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. Let me explain the details.

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morning, our

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using your meeting

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from 9 AM to 12PM. Our meeting is located in Cempaka's

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7th

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floor. After

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, we were going back to our office. Unfortunately, some of our

files

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had left and we

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assumed that the

files

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were in the meeting

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we used before. Our

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saved using

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plastic sleeve with our

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name "Toony Star". The papers were important to us

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because it is contained our

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company

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secret

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prohibited

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seen by

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's members. I kindly hope that your staff hotel could help us kept the papers and did not see the details of our

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. I would like to go to your hotel as soon as possible. During

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time, I would kindly ask

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keep our

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safe. I truly hope

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understanding regarding

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issue. Yours sincerely, William

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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7 paragraphs

186 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you that I believe I left some important papers at your hotel.
To the best of my recollection, I left the papers in the conference room.
These papers are of utmost importance as they contain confidential business information.
I kindly request that you or your staff check the conference room and securely send the papers to my address.

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