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Two bar graphs demonstraste the tourism of UK and US. Please analyze the tourism of two groups.

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The first bar
graph
show
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 that from 2011 to 2015 how many
UK
 and US
tourists
 visit US and
UK
, respectively
.
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 And the second bar
graph
 demonstrates
that
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how much each country's
tourists
 paid money in the other country in the same period.
According to
 the first
graph
,
it is clear that
UK
 tourist who travelled to
US
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the US
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 is more than US tourist who went to
UK
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the UK
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 through the given period. Even though
UK
 tourism dipped from 2011 to 2013, hitting a low of just under 3
million
, it increased over the following 2 years, peaking at 3.5
million
 in 2015. The number of US
tourists
 who visit
UK
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the UK
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 is stable at about 2.7
million
 between 2011 and 2013.
However
, the number reached its highest point of about 3.2
million
 in 2015. In the second
graph
, it is apparent that
amount
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 spent by
UK
tourists
 in
US
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the US
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 shows an upward trend constantly and is more than
US
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the US
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 tourist's
payment
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payments
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 in
UK
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the UK
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 across the five years. Amount spent by both
UK
tourists
 and US
tourists
 hit
a
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 highest point in 2015, representing 5.8 billion dollars and 4 billion dollars respectively.
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