The graph and chart below give information about migration to the UK. The graph below shows how long immigrants in the years 2000-2008 intended to stay in the UK. And the pie-chart shows reasons for migration in 2008.

The line chart demonstrates the time of long immigrants between 2000 and 2008.

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pie-chart

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presents the purposes of migrations in 2008. In general, the majority of

people

who immigrated

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not until 2

years

.

Besides

that, the main reason for migration was work.

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,it can be seen that the

people

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who expected to stay for nearly 2

years

and over 4

years

were equal

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150 thousand in 2000. Next year in 2001, the number of two-year immigrants had a sharp increase

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and peaked at 250 thousand in 2004. And

this

figure kept

steadily

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until 2008.

Besides

that, the number of

people

who intended to stay for more than 4

years

was not very flexible, just about 150 thousand. There was a steady figure of

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people

who wanted to stay for 2 to 4

years

from 2000 to 2006, it just had a little flexibility. Until 2006 and

then

, it can be seen that there was a slight rise. The pie chart illustrates that 38% of all immigrants came for work, which was the biggest factor.

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was

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rank , accounting for 32%. Following that was accompanying/joining

family

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at 16%. Other reasons and no reason stated both made up 7% of the total.