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some universities offer online courses as an alternative to classes delieved on campus. Do you think this is positive or negative?

E-learning is considered one of the most significant features
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contemporary technology.
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 some opponents of the view that attending
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courses
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universities’
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 campus pose more
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privileges
, others argue that in today’s fast pace lifestyle, offering online
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 holds spectacular positivities.
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compatible with the
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 that
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remote studies provide
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exceptional benefits. At the outskirts, the far distance factor
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 depicts the positive image of
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e-learning. In the past , it was implausible
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students
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in
courses
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offored
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offered
 by prestigious
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,
due to
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 the considerable distances between countries. Today,
students
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 can readily search online and select the best
education
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 systems, mentors or professors .
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,
student
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students
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 can attend and enhance their
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 level.
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, there
are
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a mass of competitive
e- learning
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e-learning
 platforms, which provide
awide
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a wide
 range of
creditental
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credential
courses
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 and diploma certificates from the wide world
universities
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 without any hindrance.
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, online
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 are rendering
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 in
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altitude
 the proportion of high
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 level for
students
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 around the world, neglecting the distance factor.
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, another positive factor
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 is the timing dilemma. When the
universities
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 offer remote classes,
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abundent
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abundant
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. If the apprentice attends the
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campus
 lectures, wastes
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transportation and the road,and
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 may be more than the lecture period.
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remote lectures save spare
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whereas
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students
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 can exploit
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 studies or even other activities.
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, some employees, because of their work timing,
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cannot enhance their
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 level.
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,
by
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 the advent of
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online
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, the breadwinner has become
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simplicity
implicitly
 registering
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universities
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courses
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.
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,
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 daily commuting considers exhausting for
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students
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students'
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 efforts, the presence of
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online
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 serves as a harness for individuals’ energy.
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 why offering online
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 from
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 holds a variety of positivities.
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distance learning.
Students
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 can join easily any
courses
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 around the world and attain certificates
for
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 reputed
universities
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,
other
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 positive features,
students
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 can retain more spare
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as well as
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 efforts for other
benefical
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beneficial
 activities. I firmly believe that providing online sessions from
universities
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 represents a positive phenomenon.

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