The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1
The provided line chart demonstrates how many foreigners
interest
in Add a missing verb
are interest
visit
mainly three districts in Europe over the years from 1987 to 2007.
Wrong verb form
visiting
Overall
, it is Linking Words
evindent
from the line chart that the number of Correct your spelling
evident
the
Correct article usage
apply
visitors
Change to a genitive case
visitor's
visitors'
consitiuted
upsurge trend Correct your spelling
constituted
throughou
the years and Correct your spelling
throughout
most
popular place is the Correct article usage
the most
Use synonyms
coast
Replace the word
coastal
area
.
Use synonyms
to begin
, Linking Words
it is clear that
by 1987 the chart Linking Words
shown
Wrong verb form
shows
highest
number accounted for the Correct article usage
the highest
Use synonyms
coast
Replace the word
coastal
area
at 40 Use synonyms
Use synonyms
thousands
and more than the mountains Change to singular
thousand
hwich
provide just 20 Correct your spelling
which
Use synonyms
thousands
individuals and the Change to singular
thousand
lackes
areas Correct your spelling
lakes
are
at merely 10 Unnecessary verb
apply
Use synonyms
thousands
.
Change to singular
thousand
at the end
of the period, it is obvious that the Linking Words
Use synonyms
coast
Replace the word
coastal
area
Use synonyms
registed
the Correct your spelling
registered
sam
pattern and continue Correct your spelling
same
at
Correct your spelling
a
sharp
increase and recorded 70 Correct article usage
a sharp
Use synonyms
thousands
visitors by 2007. Change to singular
thousand
While
the mountains Linking Words
area
Use synonyms
shown
gradual climbing but Wrong verb form
showed
also
recorded Linking Words
the
lower number Correct article usage
a
at
2007 which are well over 30 thousand people. Change preposition
in
on the contrary
, Linking Words
the lakes areas
represented considerable peaking Change to a genitive case
the areas of the lake
the areas of the lakes
at
2002 more than the Change preposition
in
coast
areas but dramatical dropped Use synonyms
at the end
of the period andLinking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "at the end".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words coast, area, thousands with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
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