“Prevention is better than cure.” Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is considered that a country's total

health

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be divided into treatment and

also

awareness

program

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and other minimizing factors of

health related

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issues. I completely agree with

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as it follows

"prevention

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the "prevention

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is better than cure" policy. The government should have a

longterm

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plan to execute

this

such

that a generation, probably 20 years, has learned it.

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primary education about

health

, its benefits, maintaining

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procedures

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, different

form

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of

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health

issues, the healing technique, and

the

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aborting actions. Some essential

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to achieve these

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through interactive events like TV advertisements, interesting

pamplets

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pamphlets

, attractive animations or short

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where pupils participate and communicate. On the other side, the government

also

discourage citizen to perform actions that are

hazardious

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hazardous

to

health

which can be achieved, by imposing

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tax

of

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minimizing narcotics,

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and promoting

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outdoor activities. Another way could be providing bestow to those who

has

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maintain

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health

,

hygiene

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and hygiene

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within

itself

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, community and workspace.

This

would attract others to participate and disperse the knowledge of healthy habits across the country because social satisfaction is

also

one of the needs.

Finally

, these actions, plans, and implementations would enhance the

health

of the people and

also

make them knowledgeable

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a healthy life. If these are achievable, it will lower the

health

expense and decrease the burden on

health

workers.