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“Prevention is better than cure.” Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and preventative measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#“prevention #cure #country’s #health #budget #proportion #treatment #education #measures
It is considered that a country's total
health
expense
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 be divided into treatment and
also
 awareness
program
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programs
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 and other minimizing factors of
health related
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 issues. I completely agree with
this
devise
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 as it follows
"prevention
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the "prevention
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 is better than cure" policy. The government should have a
longterm
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long-term
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 plan to execute
this
such
 that a generation, probably 20 years, has learned it.
Firstly
 start with
the
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primary education about
health
, its benefits, maintaining
procedure
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procedures
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, different
form
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forms
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 of
the
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health
 issues, the healing technique, and
the
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aborting actions. Some essential
way
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ways
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 to achieve these
are
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 through interactive events like TV advertisements, interesting
pamplets
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pamphlets
, attractive animations or short
drama
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dramas
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 where pupils participate and communicate. On the other side, the government
also
 discourage citizen to perform actions that are
hazardious
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hazardous
 to
health
 which can be achieved, by imposing
lump
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 tax
of
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 minimizing narcotics,
promoting
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and promoting
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 outdoor activities. Another way could be providing bestow to those who
has
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maintain
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health
,
hygiene
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and hygiene
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 within
itself
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their
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, community and workspace.
This
 would attract others to participate and disperse the knowledge of healthy habits across the country because social satisfaction is
also
 one of the needs.
Finally
, these actions, plans, and implementations would enhance the
health
 of the people and
also
 make them knowledgeable
for
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 a healthy life. If these are achievable, it will lower the
health
 expense and decrease the burden on
health
 workers.
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