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One of the most important issue facing the world today is a shortage of food and some think genetically modified foods are a possible solution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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The bar chart compares the European nations spending on medicine as a proportion of the Gross Domestic Product in the years 2002, 2007, and 2012.
Overall
, Switzerland had made the highest GDP yet perpetual expenditure throughout the period.
Whereas
, Estonia accounted for the least
as well as
 parallel from beginning to end. Among 12 countries, percentage-wise 8 of them had fluctuations all through the interval.
However
, Belgium, Estonia, Spain, and Switzerland remained constant being 10%, 3%, 8%, and 11% respectively. In 2002, France had 10 per cent health funding of GDP which rose to eleven per cent in 2007,(like Switzerland's GDP) but ended up being 9% in 2012. Lithuania stood between 2 and 4% during a decade. In the same way, Denmark, Lithuania, Luxembourg, Netherlands, Poland, and Slovenia maintained between 6 to 10%. They all had only a per cent of distinct throughout the duration.
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