The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.

The graph below gives information about car ownership in Britain from 1971 to 2007.
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The line chart compares different proportions of Britons owning automobiles between 1971 to 2007, including no auto, one auto, two autos and three autos and above.
Overall
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it is clear that
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there was a decreasing percentage of Britons having no car,
while
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the rate of having two motors witnessed a significant increase, but most of them had only one automobile. With a number of fluctuations, the percentage of one-car ownership remained stable, at approximately 42% over the period shown, which accounted for the majority of car ownerships since 1977.
By contrast
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, few people in the country possessed more than three cars,
although
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the rate rose as much as four times, from 2% to 8%. Around 25% of Britons did not possess cars in 2007, which almost halved the number after 36 years.
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, the proportion of the British owning 2 automobiles nearly tripled during the period, ascending to 27%, which outnumbered the percentage of people without cars.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportions" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • household
  • trend
  • fluctuate
  • increase
  • decrease
  • ownership
  • period
  • peak
  • dip
  • noteworthy
  • consistent
  • dramatic
  • highlight
  • significant
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