The three pie charts illustrate how many hours undergraduates, postgraduates and total student population spent in a British university library.
The three pie charts illustrate how many
hours
undergraduates, postgraduates and total
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the total
student
population spent in a British university library.
It is
clearly shows that those Unnecessary verb
apply
students
who are researching for the postgraduate spent more time in library
than other Add an article
the library
students
or either undergraduate students
.
For example
, just over the
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apply
one half
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one-half
postgraduates
spent at least 15 Change preposition
of postgraduates
hours
in comparison with average
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the average
student
. The numbers were 51 per Fix the agreement mistake
students
cent
and fifteen per cent
respectively. In addition
, only just under a quarter (17%) of postgraduates
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postgraduate
students
spent between 1 to 7 hours
meanwhile for the all
average Correct determiner usage
apply
student
in this
class is about 50 per cent
. Wheareas
, for undergraduates Correct your spelling
Whereas
student
the chart to be significantly diffirent
. Most Correct your spelling
different
student
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students
who
spent eight or more Correct pronoun usage
apply
hours
(37%), but out of this
total a modest nine per
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apply
cent
spent fifteen or more, which is almost one of the ten of
the corresponding figure for postgraduate levels.Change preposition
apply
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