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Information technology inables many people to do their work outside their workplace (eg: at home, when traveling, etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Several
individuals
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 are of the opinion that the evolution of gadgets allows
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a significant number of
persons
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, to do their job without the need of attending the office. On
one
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 hand, there are numerous advantages that come with
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 flexibility, but
on the other hand
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, there are
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 a great
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 of disadvantages. In
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 essay, I am going to focus and examine
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 question from both points of view.
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, on
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 side of the argument, there are
individuals
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 who think that an important benefit of working from home is time-saving.
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, most
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 lose a serious amount of time in traffic,
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 in public transportation. A particularly good example here is a recent study, which shows that an average person usually spends around
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 to two hours, going and coming from their workplace.
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,
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 of the main problems that arrives with working outside the office, is the lack of interaction with other people.
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 of
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, numerous
individuals
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 tend to become unsociable and uncomfortable around people.
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 good illustration of
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 is the multitude of our society members, which declared that after long periods of time working from home, they became more shy and introverted. On the whole, the development of information technology has both positive
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 negative effects on our work environment. As we have seen, there are no easy answers to
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 question. On balance,
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, I tend to believe that the advantages that come with
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 flexibility outweigh its disadvantages.
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