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Online shopping is now replacing shopping in the store. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

#store #development
We are now embarking
into
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 the age of
digitaslizaztion
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digitalization
digitalisation
 where everything you need is
in
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 the internet. Some individuals have the idea that shopping online will replace shopping in a store. In
these
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essay
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 I will discuss the positive and negative effects of online shopping. On the one hand, nowadays people are relying their almost everything
trough
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 online shopping,
such
 as
,
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 food, clothing, hardware and school supplies.
Everthing
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Everything
 you need is
hjust
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just
 a tap away online
shops
 like Shopee, Lazada, and Shein are just three platforms you can
you
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use to buy everything.
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Moreover
, these online
shops
 not only provide a wide range of
selection
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 it
,
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also
,
it
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 has more promos every month that a shopper enjoys. The drawbacks of shopping,
on the other hand
, more
microbuisnesses
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microbusinesses
micro businesses
 are greatly affected by
this
 online scheme some of them are evidently closing and finding another source of income. To add up, in the Philippines, a large school supply store
calle
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called
 "The National Bookstore"
are
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 in the headlines for the reason that their stores are closing
due to
 the decline of customers coming and patronizing their
shops
.
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Furthermore
, if you use online
shops
 you will wait a number of days to weeks to
recieve
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receive
 your item unlike a physical store
that
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if
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availabl
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available
;e you can have your purchase
imidiately
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immediately
. In terms of the positive effect, the advancement in technology is inevitable, even our currency is now
digialize
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digitalize
digitalized
, to
site
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 as examples are Paymaya and Gcash.
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These online
currency
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 are
also
 greatly used in online shopping.
In addition
, since the do-it-yourself phenomenon started a wide array of things
such
 as building materials, culinary recipes, and other supplies are available online. In conclusion, online
shops
 provide more beneficial help to people
especially
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 the one who are in their homes or working remotely.
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