some people tend to take temporary jobs, for they have time to do other things. Do the advantage outweighs disadvantage

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smart, go home and get paid. More and more
individual
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are having more
jobs
that
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than
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usual and a number of people prefer to have temporary
jobs
for the reason that permanent
jobs
can not offer more substantial pay and they can have extra
time
to do other
work
.
Part
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time
jobs
can offer
a
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higher pay
,
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may have lower taxes, and they do not
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than a
full
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full-time
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time
job
,
however
, these
jobs
will not give you a long life tenure and it is prone to a scam. On the one hand, having multiple
jobs
are the trend in
todays'
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society more
eople
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people
stating from students have these kinds of
work
,
wether
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whether
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two or three different
jobs
,
such
as
,
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apply
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a
store keeper
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storekeeper
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, a cleaner, nanny,
and
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or
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even tutoring
jobs
.
Dependeing
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Depending
on what type of skill you have you can have more extra
work
than a ordinary employee. Some people choose to have their love
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wey
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way
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for them to earn faster
due to
part
times have higher
salary
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salaries
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and they give low taxes, some of them give their pay in full after the contract. To add up,
these kind
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of
jobs
offer you freedom most often than not, having more
time
for yourself away from a boring and demanding
comopany
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company
manager or boss. Briefly, temporary
jobs
can give you the autonomy to choose what you like to do and still
earning
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more than others.
On the other hand
, if you are dreaming
for
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of
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a
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security of tenure, temporary
jobs
can not assure you to have permanency.
Moreover
, a
job
order or a temporary position will only give you a contract for a certain year or a period, even
you
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if you
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have renewed your contract for a long
time
if the company you are working
is
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not interested that you will be a
full -
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full-time
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time
worker, you will still end up being a temporary agent.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
, temporary
jobs
are
somtimes
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sometimes
a scam, a news agency (TVN7) announced that some of these
jobs
such
as,
part
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part-time
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time
online networking
jobs
, online financial advisor, and an account assistant
job
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jobs
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are
part
of a big social scheme leaving
individual
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individuals
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on dept if they fell in
this kinds
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these kinds
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of temporary
jobs
. In conclusion, there are many things to consider if a person wants to be employed, temporary positions have more benefits if you are just careful in choosing your
job
to sustain your everyday life.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
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  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

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  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
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