you recently attennded a meeting at a hotel . when you returned home,you found you had left some important papers at the hotel . write a letter to the manager of the hotel. in your letter .say where you think you left the papers .explain why they are so important .tell the manager what you want him/her to do

Dear Sir, I am writing in regard
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my important papers that I have left in your hotel. I was participating in a meeting that was held by my firm there. unfortunately, when coming back home, I realized that some of my important notes are missing.
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let me tell you where I think I put them. The meeting was held in the main hall of the hotel.
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saying goodbye to my colleagues, I may
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distracted and forgot to pick them up from my chair.
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. The meeting was held by my boss.He had a great
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speech and slideshows that I took notes from.
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, the papers are very important, since they are containing
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crucial information from the meeting. If I do not have them, it looks like I did not even attend the meeting.
Lastly
, it would be really great if
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can post the papers to me. I will give you my details and address with
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so that you know where to send them. please note that I will pay for the shipping. I will appreciate an urgent reply.
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faithfully, Romina Abrishambaf
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Dear Sir/Madam,
  • I am writing to inform you that I believe I left some important papers at your hotel.
  • To the best of my recollection, I left the papers in the conference room.
  • These papers are of utmost importance as they contain confidential business information.
  • I kindly request that you or your staff check the conference room and securely send the papers to my address.
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