you recently attennded a meeting at a hotel . when you returned home,you found you had left some important papers at the hotel . write a letter to the manager of the hotel. in your letter .say where you think you left the papers .explain why they are so important .tell the manager what you want him/her to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing in regard
of
my important papers that I have left in your hotel. I was participating in a meeting that was held by my firm there. unfortunately, when coming back home, I realized that some of my important notes are missing.
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At
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First
first,
let me tell you where I think I put them. The meeting was held in the main hall of the hotel.while
saying goodbye to my colleagues, I may got
distracted and forgot to pick them up from my chair. Change the verb form
get
be got
Therefore
, it would be great if you can check there please
.
The meeting was held by my boss.He had a great Add a comma
,please
two hour
speech and slideshows that I took notes from. Add a hyphen
two-hour
Thus
, the papers are very important, since they are containing of
crucial information from the meeting. If I do not have them, it looks like I did not even attend the meeting.
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Lastly
, it would be really great if yoy
can post the papers to me. I will give you my details and address with Correct your spelling
you
this
letter,
so that you know where to send them. please note that I will pay for the shipping.
I will appreciate an urgent reply.
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Youts
faithfully,
Romina AbrishambafCorrect your spelling
Yours
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