The map below shows the development of the village of Reymouth between 1995 and the present. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The present illustration of the two maps demonstrates alterations of a seaside village between 1995 and current.
Overall
,it is obvious , despite the fact that the major part of the village has experienced some considerable changes with the modernization of buildings.
It is conspicuous that the farmland and forest park have been redeveloped into a golf and tennis centre on the north-east side of the hamlet .Linking Words
Moreover
,new apartments replaced the fish market on the southwest segment of the village, Linking Words
whereas
the fishing pot has been demolished and the south-eastern side has remained untouched.
It is interesting to note that the ten little housings have been introduced to the western part of the goal,Linking Words
while
six identical buildings have been erected to the north of the restaurant, which has replaced the shop.And all these facilities are located along one street.Linking Words
Finally
, the car park is introduced to the east part of the hotel,which is positioned on the southeast side of the suburb.Linking Words
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