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In the world of the internet, people write product reviews of products and services. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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In
modern
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 network society, the vast majority of
people
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commended
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 all goods and services that they purchased or
recieved
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received
 on the social
pathform
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platform
 as they claim that there are many benefits for
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other
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people
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 that
still
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are still
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 concerned about the products or services.
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, there are those who
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 that there are heaps of
merchandise’s
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reviews
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 are unrealistic as well.
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strongly
 in favour of the latter position. On the
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 hand, it
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is certainly
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 true that
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positive
reviews
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 on
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apply
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social media can attract
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new customers and increase sales. That means as much as
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 of good
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then
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, as much as profit for the business as well.
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, There are
shop
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shops
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 “A” and “B” in the same location, venue A
recieved
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received
5 star
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reviews
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 from a
thousan
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thousand
people
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while
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 venue B just got only 20 peoples for
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reviews
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,
thus
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 clearly that when
people
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 see both
store
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stores
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reviews
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, shop A is the best selection choice definitely.
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, nowadays, most stores attempt to collect
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positive comments on social
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networks
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 as much as possible to lead their business
growths
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, even
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 the promotion for the customer who provide a good
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reviews
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 for them. In spite of
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, it cannot be denied that plentiful
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 are fake.
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 users
who
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apply
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support those businesses by
write
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 an
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exaggerate
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review
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reviews
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 and even the
people
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 who focus to destroy those works by
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 them
a
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demerit commend. That
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of
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some of them might
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received
receive
 funds to
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 up the unreal merit comments ,which
the
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is the
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 same as those
people
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 who
anti
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are anti
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thoes
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those
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to
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 their
reviews
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 as well. To illustrate, the main financial fund that YouTubers earn from their sponsors,
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, they cannot review anything drawback about the products that they
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receive
 from their sponsors.
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, we cannot touch anything until we try or face it by
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ourselves
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. in conclusion,
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 customer
reviews
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 on social media have plentiful
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impacts
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for
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the
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new customers and sales, there are enormous fake
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 that we cannot touch as well.
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