Some parents buy their childern a large number of toys to paly with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys.

As parents buy too many
toys
to play have two sides advantages
as well as
disadvantages
for the children. The advantages and
disadvantages
are described in the below information.
Firstly
, as some of the kid's
father
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buy them so many games have some benefits. As the kids will play different sports
then
they will get to learn new things.
For example
, if a child will
plays
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from
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with
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10
toy
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toys
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then
will learn 10 new things about
it
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them
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. As a child will play with
toys
then
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they
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will get more information about
tehnology
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technology
and will get more knowledge. Playing video sports
in
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apply
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make
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makes
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groups
to
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apply
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learn more about
realiy
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reality
really
about the
the
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world. As girls love playing with
berbie
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than they
gets
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more information about that.
Secondly
, there are even some side effects
such
as
,
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having more and more games is helpful for
short
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a short
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time.
Instead
of buying
toys
the
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apply
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people should buy valuable things.
For example
, if
father
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will spend more and more on
toy
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toys
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there can be possible of wasting
resouces
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resources
.
Thirdly
, if
the
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people will buy
toys
then
production will
be
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increase and
womens
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women
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will get more and more employment. As
due to
more production people are getting benefits so government should support
toys
company. On level buying more and more game waste resource. Government should make aware about public to use of eco-friendly goods, and the public should reuse, reduces and recycle more and more.
To conclude
, Both have equal gains
as well as
disadvantages
.
Hence
,
toys
do not have side effects.
Toys
have gains and
disadvantages
equally.
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