Some parents buy their childern a large number of toys to paly with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys.
As parents buy too many
toys
to play have two sides advantages as well as
disadvantages
for the children. The advantages and disadvantages
are described in the below information.
Firstly
, as some of the kid's father
buy them so many games have some benefits. As the kids will play different sports Fix the agreement mistake
fathers
then
they will get to learn new things. For example
, if a child will plays
Change the verb form
play
from
10 Change preposition
with
toy
Change to a plural noun
toys
then
will learn 10 new things about it
. As a child will play with Correct pronoun usage
them
toys
then
will get more information about Correct your spelling
they
tehnology
and will get more knowledge. Playing video sports Correct your spelling
technology
in
Change preposition
apply
make
groups Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
to
learn more about Change the verb form
apply
realiy
about the Correct your spelling
reality
really
the
world. As girls love playing with Remove the redundancy
apply
berbie
than they Change the capitalization
Berbie
gets
more information about that.
Change the verb form
get
Secondly
, there are even some side effects such
as,
having more and more games is helpful for Remove the comma
apply
short
time. Correct article usage
a short
Instead
of buying toys
the
people should buy valuable things. Correct article usage
apply
For example
, if father
will spend more and more on Add an article
the father
toy
there can be possible of wasting Fix the agreement mistake
toys
resouces
. Correct your spelling
resources
Thirdly
, if the
people will buy Correct article usage
apply
toys
then
production will be
increase and Unnecessary verb
apply
womens
will get more and more employment. As Correct your spelling
women
due to
more production people are getting benefits so government should support toys
company. On level buying more and more game waste resource. Government should make aware about public to use of eco-friendly goods, and the public should reuse, reduces and recycle more and more.
To conclude
, Both have equal gains as well as
disadvantages
. Hence
, toys
do not have side effects. Toys
have gains and disadvantages
equally.Submitted by purvametaliya99 on
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