The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The line graph given compares the percentage of
population
living in cities in four South East Asian Add an article
the population
countries
namely Philippines
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the Philippines
Malaysia
, Thailand
, and Indonesia
(from 1970-2020), with future forecast
from 2030 to 2040.
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forecasts
Overall
, all countries
have sharply increase
from the entire period even in the predicted computation Change the verb form
increased
on
the Change preposition
for
year
2040. While
Malaysia
has the largest urban population
increase
with the rest of the reamning
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remaining
countries
, a similar trend is observed with indonesia
with a Change the capitalization
Indonesia
continous
prediction Correct your spelling
continuous
on
the end of the given period, Change preposition
at
however
, in terms of Philippines
and Correct article usage
the Philippines
Thailand
, fluctuations are noticed before it reached its peak on the final year
.
On the one hand, Malaysia
and the Philippines
started a bout
30 Correct your spelling
about
percent
of Change the spelling
per cent
indiviual
living in cities, Correct your spelling
individuals
individual
however
in 1990, both countries
have
a little over Wrong verb form
had
increment
of 40 Add an article
an increment
the increment
percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
while
Malaysia
started to have its remarkable increase
where it will expected
Change the verb form
expect
peak
at roughly 86%, Fix the infinitive
to peak
conversely
the Add a comma
,conversely
Philippines
have a decline from 2000-2010 before it will have a 50% additional people in the cities.
On the other hand
, Thailand
and Indonesia
started a low percentile of city population
at below 20%, despite of
the foreseen Change preposition
apply
four fold
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four-fold
increase
in the number of Add an article
an individual
the individual
individual
that will occupy city Change to a plural noun
individuals
center
in Change the spelling
centre
Indonesia
where it overtakes tahiland
in the Change the capitalization
Tahiland
year
2000 at an estimate
percentage of 26%. Change the verb form
estimated
Morover
, Correct your spelling
Moreover
Thailand
is expected to bolster population
numbers in the year
2040 with a 10% additional people from 2020 where it stalled at 30%.Submitted by cacholarenzelle on
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