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In today's world of advanced science and technology, we still greatly value our artists such as musicians, painters and writers. What can the arts tell us about life that science and technology cannot?

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Although
 the world has seen
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considerable growth
of
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 science and
technology
,
art
 still holds a certain importance in the cultural and spiritual
life
 of people because of the benefits which humans have received from
the
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artist
such
 as musicians, painters and writers not from scientists. In my opinion, there are many valuable things that almost all people can study based on these arts. Admittedly, nowadays, humans have many kinds of entertainment activities which help the spiritual enhancement of
life
. These activities are not indispensable for balancing
life
 and work. It is because of its benefits that it is easy to find short-term
art
 classes widely held in many centres as a method of relaxation, emotional expression and creativity.
This
 is extremely necessary in daily
life
while
 science and
technology
 seem to ignore them.
Besides
,
art
also
 creates
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human value through their work that no
technology
 can be transmitted. Take a writer for an example, they have strong power to spread meaningful stories and positive energy to communities that can contribute, maintain and develop the good culture and tradition of each nation.
Moreover
, In medicine, doctors used music as a tool to ease the pain of the treatment regimens, especially for patients who meet mental problems.
This
 not only brings many benefits but
also
 reduces recovery time.  In conclusion, science and
technology
 bring much knowledge about modern things but
art
 helps people deeply understand and know what they want to be.
Therefore
, both of them should be maintained and developed equally to ensure no loss of traditional and cultural
value
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 of the nation.
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