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the graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Australia between 1995 and 2005

the graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Australia between 1995 and 2005
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The graph illustrates the expenditure on books in four countries of Germany, France, Italy and Australia from 1995 to 2005. The relative figures were
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, it can be seen that spending on books increased in all four countries. It is
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 noticeable that spending was highest in Germany and France.
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 spending started in 1995 at 80
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 before increasing to 90
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 in 1999. After that, it declined to around 85
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 in 2003 before it increased to approximately 95
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 in the final year. Turning to France, it is spending begin in1995 at about 55
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 to around 75
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 by 2005. Meanwhile, Italy spent nearly 50
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 in 1995.
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increased to around 55
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 in 1997 before dropping to
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 50
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 in 1999. After that, it increased to nearly 61
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 in 1995, but
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 it rose gradually to 40
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. After that, it rocketed to Just over 70
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 in the final year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words synonyms with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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