The graph shows the amount of money spent on book in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.

The graph shows the amount of money spent on book in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
The given
line
graph
show
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shows
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the amount of money spent on
book
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a book
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in
Germany
, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
Overall
it can be seen
Germany
is the highest
percentage
of money spent on books at the first
time
and Austria is the lowest fee. Looking at
firgues
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figures
,
Germany
appeared
at
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in
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1995 with the highest money : 80
million
dollars
. The
line
went up to 90
million
dollars
between 1995 and 1999.
At the
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The
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next
time
, in 2003, it went back to nearly 80
milion
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million
dollars
, it take a long
time
to
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for to
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Germany
can
went
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go
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up and peak at 95
million
dollars
to be the country
had
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that had
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the highest
percentage
at
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apply
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last
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the last
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time
. France is the next highest
line
after
Germany
, appeared in 1995 with 55
million
dollars
but it went up to nearly 80
million
dollars
between 1995 and 2005. Next is Italy,
appeared
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which appeared
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same
time
with
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as
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Germany
and France for the first
time
, the
line
started at 50
million
dollars
, it fluctuated between 1995 and 1999, but at
this
time
, it had a big change, the
line
started
went
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going
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up to the highest, 50
million
dollars
, but it not enough to compare with another
line
, it was the lowest
line
of all. Austria is the lowest
percentage
in
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for
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the first
time
but it went up to a
percentage
which is higher than Italy, it didn’t fall all of the
time
between 1995 and 2005.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 91%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words line, germany, percentage, time, million, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.

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