The graph shows the amount of money spent on book in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
The given
line
graph show
the amount of money spent on Change the verb form
shows
book
in Add an article
a book
Germany
, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 and 2005.
Overall
it can be seen Germany
is the highest percentage
of money spent on books at the first time
and Austria is the lowest fee.
Looking at firgues
, Correct your spelling
figures
Germany
appeared at
1995 with the highest money : 80 Change preposition
in
million
dollars
. The line
went up to 90 million
dollars
between 1995 and 1999. At the
next Change preposition
The
time
, in 2003, it went back to nearly 80 milion
Correct your spelling
million
dollars
, it take a long time
to
Change preposition
for to
Germany
can went
up and peak at 95 Change the verb form
go
million
dollars
to be the country had
the highest Correct pronoun usage
that had
percentage
at
Change preposition
apply
last
Correct article usage
the last
time
. France is the next highest line
after Germany
, appeared in 1995 with 55 million
dollars
but it went up to nearly 80 million
dollars
between 1995 and 2005.
Next is Italy, appeared
same Correct pronoun usage
which appeared
time
with
Change preposition
as
Germany
and France for the first time
, the line
started at 50 million
dollars
, it fluctuated between 1995 and 1999, but at this
time
, it had a big change, the line
started went
up to the highest, 50 Wrong verb form
going
million
dollars
, but it not enough to compare with another line
, it was the lowest line
of all. Austria is the lowest percentage
in
the first Change preposition
for
time
but it went up to a percentage
which is higher than Italy, it didn’t fall all of the time
between 1995 and 2005.Submitted by [email protected] on
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 91%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words line, germany, percentage, time, million, dollars with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "amount" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "went up" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
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