The graph shows the amount of money spent on books in Germany , France , Italy and Australia between 1995 and 2005.
The line graph below
give
us information about the profit Change the verb form
gives
that
spend on books in four Correct pronoun usage
apply
country
were, Germany ,France, Italy and Australia from 1995 to 2005.
Change to a plural noun
countries
Overall
it can be seen that Germany has the highest US dollars in
Change preposition
of
four
capital. Correct article usage
the four
In
contrast
Australia Add a comma
,contrast
also
has the lowest money
that use
on books . What is more the graph Change the verb form
uses
give
us information about two Change the verb form
gives
country
Change to a plural noun
countries
are
France and Italy Unnecessary verb
apply
also
have an increased
in several Replace the word
increase
month
.
Beginning with the highest Change to a plural noun
months
money
that Germany use
.It started at 80% in 1995 Correct subject-verb agreement
uses
then
it slightly increased to nearly 90% before it reach a peak at around 95% in 2005.After that was Australia with the worst income profit that begin with
30% Change preposition
at
then
it have climb up to 71% from 1995 to 2005, which has go over Italy at
2005.
Turning to the remaining statistic , France was the second capital has high Change preposition
in
money
that use on
books , which begin at 55% in 1995 and slightly go up to 70% in 2001 before it ending the Change preposition
for
peroid
at nearly 75% in 2005 .At Correct your spelling
period
last
Add a comma
,last
was
Italy Unnecessary verb
apply
also
have quit
good Correct your spelling
quite
money
spent at 50% in 1995, but after few
years it Correct article usage
a few
have
Unnecessary verb
apply
a
decreased Correct article usage
apply
at
50% in 1999 . After Change preposition
to
that
it Add a comma
,that
has
slightly increased to nearly 61% in 2005.Unnecessary verb
apply
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