“The flow chart illustrates the consequences of deforestation. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features.”
The flow chart depicts what consequences are expected after removing forests. Deforestation leads to four main swift impacts, which eventually give rise to torrents, deterioration of biodiversity and augmented lack of rainfall.
One of the main effects is that soil is squashed owing to heavy logging equipment;
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, the soil becomes solid and toasted,and rainfall flows on the ground;Linking Words
consequently
,flooding happens. Deforestation Linking Words
also
contributes to the degradation of roots which hold the surface of the topsoil abraid.
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Thirdly
, it causes more risk for wildfire which can be formed by mistake or people cause . Linking Words
Then
, waste disappears Linking Words
due to
the burning,and living creatures which use them as a food resource are lost. Linking Words
This
results in impoverished vegetation. Linking Words
Finally
, plants offer less humidity to air; Linking Words
as a result
, there occurs less precipitation and ever-increasing water shortage.
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Overall
, the chart shows how the cutting of forests yields four main devastations alongside their underlying reasons.Linking Words
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